Monday evening

A new painting got underway yesterday evening, don't seem to be quite as into this one as the previous efforts so far, hopefully an evening on my lonesome tonight will help the concentration and I can pay it the attention I would like to.

Right, so I have finally figured it out, so here are my paintings so far, including the new one I started last night and a copy of the original, comments are welcome (by the way I don't profess to being able to actually paint!)